Thanks for the feedback, Malcolm. I hear you about the let down at the end because I felt it as I wrote it. :) I just couldn’t think of anything better in the short time I devoted to it. Maybe part of my problem was feeling like the scene had to be an entire story that required resolution. I attempted to write one screenplay back in the 80’s and haven’t tried my hand at it since. If I come at future attempts as scenes and not entire movies maybe I’ll fare better.